You’ll recognize them.
The dark hoodies. The
ear-buds. These individuals can be seen
slinking around the neglected streets without a care for their fellow human
being. Likened to the walking dead –
they appear emotionless and pale from spending hours on their computers in
darkened rooms or basements. We are
truly seeing the zombie apocalypse embodied in our youth and the musical filth
they listen to. It is time for
action. The government is our last and
only hope. Only they have the reach and
the resources to rid our society of this technological plague.
There are a number of reasons we need censorship now. First, there are countless instances where content
reinforces negative behaviors such as violence and physical abuse in the
home. Why is government expected to aid
victims and prosecute offenders and not expected to regulate music that
reinforces this kind of behavior? Government, with censorship, can help
decrease these kinds of incidents simply by eradicating the glorification of
dangerous or illegal behavior.
Secondly, the government should be committed to uphold the
morals dictated by society. And by doing
so, protect young and easily influenced minds from vulgarity and sexually explicit
content. Indeed, some of these individuals
may not understand the difference between reality and fantasy and may act on the
content as we saw in the suicide case of John McCollum. Here, the case was dismissed but bitterly
reminds us that lyrics can have a savage effect on the unstable or depressed.
Lastly, the music industry has been invited to self-regulate
for years and has fought the idea with their vast resources. We believe they will never entirely
self-regulate. This is where the
government is needed to help in the prevention of amoral lyrics reaching the
minds of our youth. Likewise, the
censorship is needed to prevent obscene and sexually explicit lyrics from
reaching everyday listeners. The
government’s mission is to uphold and maintain the morals for the society it
serves.
I look forward to a future where music and artistic expression
are created for the betterment of society and done so solely by the artist without
the encouragement of government. For all
of those 1st amendment peddlers – you must concede that society has
degraded immensely in the past 60 years. We live
in a different time where terrorists are trying to unravel what is left of our
society. They will infiltrate any and
all avenues that are open to them. The
government is obligated to protect our interests as well as our delicate
societal structure. We are straddling
the razor’s edge between functional society and amoral anarchy. Censorship is one small piece of a vast
puzzle that requires government action.
Are you ready to jump blindly into the breach of depravity?
Great choice of topic that's I'm sure counter to your own opinion. You presented the opposition's views clearly with some strong arguments.
ReplyDeleteYour lead quickly introduces the stance of the piece. I think you could possibly lose your second paragraph; although I like the tone of it, it just seems like you should jump right into your reasons for censorship.
Be careful switching between singular and plural: "The government is our last and only hope...Only they have the reach" "the music industry...with their vast resources," etc.
You could also probably lose the part on the artists' potential for increased productivity. That argument doesn't seem as strong and in the paragraph before you say "Lastly," so it just seems out of place.
A very interesting read and well presented counter argument.
Fuck. That must have hurt.
ReplyDeleteI thought the second paragraph was the best one. It does have a different tone, but if anything, I would prefer bringing the rest to that tone than cutting it out.
Nigel would love this argument too. It's a very true depiction of how people with extreme opinions present their points. It has a classic slippery slope rhetoric - rude music will lead to terrorism. Wonderful.
-NK
I agree oneeye! I think that financial gain paragraph needs to go. To you both: this argument went against every fiber of my being. Crazies!
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